Some critique, perhaps? :)
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angst angst angst...and vague imagery - I need to go write something happy now...
angst angst angst...and vague imagery - I need to go write something happy now...
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Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)
woo-hoo!
aye, not the happiest
but mmm-mmmm good stuff
thank you!
aye, not the happiest
but mmm-mmmm good stuff
thank you!
And I don't know how To slow it down Oh, my mind's racing From chasing pirates.